It’s been a few chapters since the last time I said “huh, really wish I’d drawn this page like X instead of Y.”
Well, now I’m gonna do one more: Should’ve given this part of the conversation an extra page or two.
(And this is not updated in the Master’s Edition, because from the start, I made myself a rule of “not going to make any change that involves drawing whole new pages, that way lies madness.”)
Give Poe’s reveal extra weight by showing some flashback panels under the narration. I’m not thinking “graphic animal harm, front and center!”, more like “show that the location is dark and ominous, that the people are cruel and intimidating, that Miranda is really out-of-place and making an impressive effort not to freak out.”
Would’ve been a nice bit of lore to see Poe’s last incarnation, too. In retrospect, he’s the only one of the Big Six (along with Patrick, Reseda, Kara Lynn, Cybele, and Blake) whose previous form we never even get to see in cameo.
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