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Annotated Chapter 10 Page 23

Photo scenes montageMulti-character status montage! I always want to do these with something tying them together -- even if it's not a substantial Plot Theme, just a recurring phrase. Pretty sure the first time I remember seeing "a catchphrase makes a neat throughline through disparate scenes" was a Sailor Moon fanfic. ...and I just spent maybe 20 minutes trying to find it again, with no luck, so you don't get a link. Bonus points for any reader who can pull up links for other BICP pages that use this device. Leif & Thorn strips are welcome too.
How’s everybody doing on this fine day? Jany and Kara Lynn? Jany: I can’t believe I’m looking forward to getting back to sleeping on my brother’s couch. Kara Lynn: Master… Miranda and Poe? Miranda: I can’t believe I’m waiting for the end of a Florida vacation. Poe: You’re waiting to see Patrick. It’s only natural. Timothy and Reseda? Timothy: I can’t believe it’s not butter! Reseda: Is that from the store that keeps trying to “donate” expired food? I can’t believe we’re still accepting stuff from them at all! Sparrow and Bianca? Sparrow: I can’t believe this rain! Bianca: It gets like this in Massachusetts too. Sparrow: Yeah, and I figured that was a freak of nature! Ann Walker and her Being? Walker: I can’t believe how long that took. The Tiger: Sorry, Master. At least you don’t have any meetings until the afternoon. Tina and Dotan? Tina: I can’t believe your costume didn’t win! I bet you were the only real wolf there! Dotan: Um . . . about that . . .

2 thoughts on “Annotated Chapter 10 Page 23”

  1. I think the first time I saw something tying comic strips together was this week of Narbonic”.

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