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Annotated Chapter 30 Page 15

Person labeled 'Me', standing in front of a massive wave labeled 'the thing I could have done right away but didn't and now it's a big fucking problem'A whole page of reaction shots. Look, this might be the last big Suspense Moment I get to do in BICP, gotta make it count.

Deep dark secret: I drew the previous page not knowing how it would shake out.

Would Walker successfully demolish Blake, or no? Did the bullet miss, did someone shield Cohen, or did he take the hit? If it hit him, that opened up "Cohen tragically dies in the last 20 pages" as an option -- would that fit, thematically, with everything else I had built in the series up to this point?

It wasn't that I didn't have ideas -- I had too many ideas. And had kept things open so I could do any of them. But the time when I had to make a decision, and knock all the rest off the table, was coming up fast.

There’s a speedpaint with part of the coloring of this page, check it out here:


[LEAP!]

Sparrow: No–!

[GLIDE!]

[ffftt–]

[SPROING]

[SWISH]

[BLOCK]

Freyda: Grrr….

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