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Annotated Chapter 30 Page 33

carved crystal dogBig future spread.

The star texture in the background is the same one as on the updated Chapter 1 cover. All the characters are a bit older, but doing well. Jany has the wherewithal to maintain a more...well, high-maintenance haircut. And how do you like that Josh in the background, doing finger-guns? I think he'd be happy about how all this shook out.

I offered this as a potential mini-print with the Master's Edition Kickstarter, but it got out-voted by the Chapter 20 cover. Maybe I'll make it a print separately anyway.

...so my current thought, writing this in 2021, is to follow this with the Master's Edition bonus comics. Will I want to keep them 100% book/ebook exclusive forever? Or will 2025 be the year when I release them for free?

I'll come back to edit this later, and we'll find out.

There's definitely a few more omake and bonuses to post, after this. Going at least until February 21, when I'll post the final Annotated Anniversaries. And then...it'll be done?

Yeah, wow. It'll be done.


Sparrow: In this house we love and support every type of Being there is . . . but I’m still mostly a cat person.

4 thoughts on “Annotated Chapter 30 Page 33”

  1. I can’t believe I’ve read over this entire story twice. It’s so good. Is the Master’s Edition including the edits and such you’ve made over the course of the Annotated chapters or is it the original?

    1. Thank you <3

      The Master's Edition has the edited version, yes! I queued all the Annotated posts while I was putting the Master's Edition together, so I was just updating the pages at the same time for both projects.

      (And writing the notes at the same time. The books don't have all the lengthy annotations I put on the website, but they have a subset.)

  2. This was incredible, both on the first ride through and reading the commentary the second time. Thank you for doing this.

    I’m still a cat person though.

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