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Annotated Chapter 30 Page 6

Kitten surrounded by candy miceLots of nice neon highlights on this page.

"Taking the Wolf off the field" was such a generous move on the team's behalf. Without that, Walker would've been paralyzed with terror that they were going to send the Wolf to outright murder her. After all, it's what she would do.

Does it suck a bit of the tension out of the scene, though? If our heroes had any doubt they'd win, they would've kept Freyda on the field as backup, right? So they're definitely winning.


Freyde: . . . I could do a lot more for the team than “take a fall”, Master.

Sparrow: I know, Freyde! And I’ll have so many other things for you to do from now on. I promise.

Walker: Go to ground — find cover. If she’s really taken out Ilsa, you can hide behind me —

Blake: There’s nowhere like that! No caverns in the rocks . . .

Walker: Then get small enough so I can cover you!

Blake: In that case, boss — be ready to move fast!!

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